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Open Poetry #8
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Effigy
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 486
disbelief
0 posted 2000-06-20 02:28 AM



I wish that I could feel,
but you can not touch my reality.
I wish that my eyes would open,
but you can not see these phantoms,
these dreams of mine.




After all, what is reality anyway? Nothin' but a collective hunch.
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X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
1 posted 2000-06-20 02:31 AM

a lil snippet of a poem...
kewl!
~Heather
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-06-20 04:17 AM

this poem is rather short but i do find i meaning and i see your wish. bravo.. keep it up.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul
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