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Take, Tell, Touch. . .
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Take, Tell, Touch. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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take my heart to a place it's never been lost in love guided by desire tell me that it's really love that I'm in touch the flame dance with the fire tell my ears of a love that only few know sung so soft so gently written tell me that it's really a love that'll grow with your heart i'm very smitten touch my soul with the depth of this feeling love of life a life filled with love tell me that my heart won't stop reeling from your heart angel from above ----------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beautiful Sven  coco |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Beautiful...reads like a song. Wonderful poem here. Christina =^..^= |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
wow, this was very romantic and tender Sven  ~H [This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!!! I love it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahhhhh you just do this so well dont you  must mean your a poet huh? indeed you are. lovely tender sentiments Sven-gator... as always...written with that gentle poets pen jm |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
touch my soul with the depth of this feeling love of life a life filled with love tell me that my heart won't stop reeling from your heart angel from above ....... Sir Sven, the ever-romantic, gently pours his heart out with lovely words forming a beautiful chain of thoughts...oh, what a delightful pleasure to read... Regards, sudhir. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is very romantic Sven flows really well thanks for sharing |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very sweet!! I like this!! Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven~ this is so romantic! It does sound like a song. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sven, beautiful! if this were put to some music, i'd be hooked! gosh i so adore your work .take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Our magical, mystical Sven... waving romance about yet again... wonderful. Thank you! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Wonderful writing as always my friend. Marina I have been blessed by an Angel that gives wings to my words, and ink to my pen. Marina Crossley |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
There ya go again spreading romantic notions around like so much magic faerie dust! Love it!!! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, So romantic and sweet. The words just seem to flow from your poetic pen my friend. Excellent writing . . . LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Sven~ Beautifully written piece... Just beautiful. You seem to have a great talent my friend. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Coco, thank you my friend. . . bobbycat, really?? Thank you!! Heather, thanks. . . deVine, glad that you liked it. . . Janet, am I really?? LOL But I know you are. . . but what am I??  Sudhir, thank you my friend. . .your encouragement is appreciated!! whiskey, you're welcome!!! Justbleu, thank you!! SEA, a song?? Well, ok!!! LOL Aimster, thanks!! I adore your work too!! sunshine, thank you. . . it's all I know. . . Marina, thank you for your words. . . Wild Child, yep!! There I go again!! Need some faerie dust?? LW, thank you. . .and yes they do. . . DE, thank you also. . . your words mean a lot. . . ------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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