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Just A Dream
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Just A Dream |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Just A Dream Your voice I will not hear Your touch I will not feel Your kiss I will not taste Your love I do embrace Grasping to the images That my memories have placed All of them a part of me Not a moment left to waste Trying to find my refuge In a dream’s vivid imagery Holding on to thoughts of you As my soul is now set free I greet you with a kiss No other of it’s kind Smile and say I love you A truer love I could not find Taking in the scenery As I enjoy my lovely ride Relishing in every moment That I’m with you by your side So intoxicating is your love But suddenly a break of sleep Realizing it was just a dream I lay alone and silently weep |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Wonderful dream kat. Go back to sleep and start over! LOL  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I have had dreams like this....you described them well with such desire! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Kat, you seem to have a knack Reaching out to yearning hearts Such verses you write I really like Coco |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Simply beautiful poem kat... Love it. It is dreams like this that make me sometimes wish I would never wake. Maybe someday you will find the love that you dream of. After all, A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes.... A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Great poem i love the desire you use to bring things to life. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Eloise: I think you might be right there. I better go back to sleep. Who knows, maybe when I wake up it might be real. Thanks! Romantic: Thanks, I think everyone at one point in their life has dreams like this and the desire in such dreams is real. MysticalNights: Yeah maybe, and I agree with what you've said. A dream is a wish a heart makes. Especially with dreams such as this. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Coco: Thanks for your compliment and I'm glad you enjoy my verses. They come from the heart. Jeremiah: Thank-you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. kat |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
~ Don't cry little wet pussy just come a little closer! You are still dreaming! Allow me to introduce myself. Hi I'm insectual! I live insectual dreams, But you can call me ~ insect ~ if you like. When you think you're awake, you may just be in a wet dream! Only I will be they're swimming with you, leading you into deeper waters to fantasy islands of multiple pleasures. And I will twist them into strange and wonderful happenings that might seem even scary but fun if you keep dreaming with me and you will only know when you see this ~ at the beginning and end ~ WAKE UP kat I think your dreaming again!!! Great poem kat! I can hardly wait to see your next poem or dream! Are you sweating! Ya! I know it is hot in here sometimes! |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
Your love is so intoxicating Yes I know its true For its the strength of your love That makes me feel so blue Its not your love for me That makes me melancholy Its all we can not see In this lovers folly Hidden pit falls , at every turn Reality waking us from our sleep Feelings left, to yearn and burn The memory of , trying to keep If only I could predict, our bold future See ahead the strands of time The hole in our hearts, I could suture Forever more you'd be mine [This message has been edited by Dakota (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
Dreams, a wish the heart makes So sad , but so true If they only had what it takes To make it all come true |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow!!!!! .I love this poem. Keep writing!!!!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Kit,this is my dream you are dreaming, to a T !! very touching! My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Insect: You make me laugh with all your jokes..lol I just wish it was sweat that filled my sheets and not tears. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Dakota: No one can predict the futur. Sometimes we think we can but we can't. Someone who I love very much once told me to live for today and the futur will find it's way of working out. They had a close call and their views changed about life. Decided not just to live but go after their happiness. As far as dreams coming true. Well I believe that dreams can come true but sometimes it takes more time to make that happen and sometimes it just happens. Some dreams only come true when alot of work and patience is put in and some with some sacrifice. "Forever you'd be mine" Everything is posible if given a shot sometimes. Where there's a will, there's a way. Thanks for your beautiful poem and thanks for your verse Dakota. Vandana: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Dark Angel: It's ashame that so many people have dreams like that and they're not realty. I'm glad you enjoyed it. kat |
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