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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2000-06-19 10:43 PM


minutes stretch into hours
and still i hear your voice
like an echo in my mind

it wont be long...it wont be long

daylight turns into dusk
as the snow falls silently down
blanketing my world

it wont be long...it wont be long

i feel your presense
i sense you near
touching me

it wont be long...it wont be long

fragments of memories
chase through my mind
your voice calling me

it wont be long...it wont be long


© Copyright 2000 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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1 posted 2000-06-19 10:58 PM


Welcome to Passions, Paula -- I hope you
will love it here as much I do.

Wonderful poem - thanks for sharing

~netswan

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-06-19 11:10 PM


Welcome to the family! I love this poem. I hope you enjoy your time here.. Please check your email for a special welcome.  
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2000-06-20 12:16 PM


welcome to Passions!!!! your words of longing capture the mood here!
whiskey
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4 posted 2000-06-20 03:33 AM


Wonderful poem, I can relate to it   Welcome to passions
JulieAnn
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5 posted 2000-06-20 03:51 AM


Welcome to passions! very good by the way.....

Julie :)

Nan
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6 posted 2000-06-20 07:31 AM


Very nice - I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. Welcome to Passions..
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7 posted 2000-06-20 08:58 PM


Paula~
Welcome to this wonderful family of poets and friends.
A super entry you've made.
~*Marge*~


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Jeffrey Carter
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8 posted 2000-06-21 12:43 PM


Welcome to our family Paula

I am looking forward to reading more of your work

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep



CocoBaci
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9 posted 2000-06-21 12:48 PM


Sigh, it won't be long I trust before we see another poem of your's
Coco  

Paula Finn
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10 posted 2000-06-24 02:55 PM


You all make me feel very welcome and its nice tyo finally have someone read my stuff
Trew
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11 posted 2000-06-24 03:31 PM


Paula,   Welcome to Passions!
You have a very smooth style.  I enjoyed the poem and am looking forward to more from you!

Trew.

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12 posted 2000-06-24 04:54 PM


Lovely, Paula! Welcome to this wonderful family in Passions!   I hope you find much happiness with us!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

vandana
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13 posted 2000-06-25 06:14 PM


Nice written!!!!
Paula Finn
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14 posted 2000-07-04 03:16 PM


I was so new to this that I never said thank you...so to all of you my heartfelt thanks for your welcome and your words
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