Open Poetry #8 |
love |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
minutes stretch into hours and still i hear your voice like an echo in my mind it wont be long...it wont be long daylight turns into dusk as the snow falls silently down blanketing my world it wont be long...it wont be long i feel your presense i sense you near touching me it wont be long...it wont be long fragments of memories chase through my mind your voice calling me it wont be long...it wont be long |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Paula -- I hope you will love it here as much I do. Wonderful poem - thanks for sharing ~netswan |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I love this poem. I hope you enjoy your time here.. Please check your email for a special welcome. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
welcome to Passions!!!! your words of longing capture the mood here! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful poem, I can relate to it Welcome to passions |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Welcome to passions! very good by the way..... Julie :) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice - I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. Welcome to Passions.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Welcome to this wonderful family of poets and friends. A super entry you've made. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to our family Paula I am looking forward to reading more of your work All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sigh, it won't be long I trust before we see another poem of your's Coco |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You all make me feel very welcome and its nice tyo finally have someone read my stuff |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Paula, Welcome to Passions! You have a very smooth style. I enjoyed the poem and am looking forward to more from you! Trew. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely, Paula! Welcome to this wonderful family in Passions! I hope you find much happiness with us! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice written!!!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I was so new to this that I never said thank you...so to all of you my heartfelt thanks for your welcome and your words |
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