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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) A spring shower was cause to run Until you twirled me in the rain The glow of the moon announced the day was done Until it became a lover's domain A rainbow was a only a colorful view Until it’s arch drew hope in my skies The stars were reserved for a midnight debut Until I saw them in your soft loving eyes A poem was just a talented rhyme Until you wove one just for me A moment was a blink in time Until you shared a few with me My soul was a dwelling for fears Until you promised you would stay My eyes only knew the sadness of tears Until your tender kiss took them all away Love was a license for pain Until you surrounded me in a loving glow Alone was what I wanted to remain Until your heart I came to know |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, Butterflies! This is one of my favorites of yours...and I say that thinking that I may have said that about many of yours that I have read. But, you are truly a gifted poet and I enjoy everything you put to paper. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Butterflies~ I loved this! You expressed the love you feel so well. Wonderful, wonderful work! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH MAN----I AM SOARING AROUND THE ROOM GIRL THIS IS AWESOME, EXQUISITE!!!!! OMG I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!! AND YOU BETTER GET BACK HERE AND CHECK THAT SUBMIT-TO-BOOK-BOX!!! THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT... I LOVE SEEING YOU WRITE LIKE THIS IT GAVE ME WINGS TONITE AND I NEEDED EM BABY... I NEEDED EM THANK YOU LOVE YA JM  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Butterflies......my dear friend, where do you start with something like this! Awesome, exquisite, beautiful, perfect, wonderful, a gifted poet.....all are words that aptly describe this work and the poet. This is fabulous work my friend! One would be so very deeply touched to know that you have these feelings of love! Take Care! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
TA* You are much to kind, thank you from the bottom of my heart for your sweet replies and for reading~ Elizabeth* Thank you very much. It was a gift for an amazing person...doesn't do him justice though! Thank you for reading~ Jan* WOW, and here I wasn't going to post this at all I lack BIG TIME in the Love Poem department  you write what you know...ya know?! Thank you S.S. I appreciate it very much, I do LOVE these flutterbies from you ~Eagle* Thank you so much my dear friend...Love inspires many things, even a rare love poem from me I'm touched that you enjoyed it and your kindness gave me a **blush** Thank you from the bottom of my heart~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was exquisite Butterflies! What a wonderful tribute to someone special ... touched my heart this did! Beautifully written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
THIS IS AN AWESOME PIECE BUTTERFLIES AND VERY HEARTOUCHING AND WELL-WRITTEN! THANKS FOR SHARING THIS GREAT PIECE! Nathan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Kit~ He's a beautiful person...my only regret is that I couldn't have said it better. Thank you for your kind reply~ Nate~ Thank you so much I appreciate you reading~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Digging I went and a vein of gold I found. This is so tender,sweet, and openly sincere that I had to bring it back up. I am rejoicing in the riches that I have found this wonderful morn.  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How perfectly awesome is this love you share with us never say never |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Butterflies~ Oh, my dear, this is so beautiful! You are incredible, my dear! I don't think you could have said this any better, my friend! I have to agree with JanetMarie ~ Your poetry always gives my wings! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* Thank you so much for your kindness and your sweet comments...always a smile Paula* Thank you...Love can be a beautiful thing~ Terry* I'm glad I could give you wings...just remember...the dry cleaning bills can break you  Thank you always for your comments~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You know my friend there are some real gems to be found in the archives, and this is certainly one of them! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
BDC, you just write soooooooooooo beautifully ya know that huh... HugsNsmiles2uSweetie *~coco~* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a change! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
They say the cream always rises to the top; well this one is a living example I think. Still a wonderful piece, still my favourite! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearestPoetess~ Though you are no longer here, I hope that someday you will return to see what we admirers think of your beautiful poetry~ This is just exquisite~ I miss you, little flutterbye~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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