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When You Were My Mine
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When You Were My Mine |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
When You Were Mine If only to recapture from the beginning, what we once had when we were winning. Everything came easy for you and me, the attraction, the closeness to be in our own company. I miss the days of flowers given for no reason, now for holidays only I must be out of season. To think of the time when we were so close, and to watch it flee hurts the most. ~Lorraine~ A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How very sad, Lorraine. The last four lines say so much. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Lorraine, these verses are so heartfelt. I don't know how I could have let this one slip by  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful Lorraine. . . The beginning is always the best part isn't it? It's sad when the end comes and we always wonder what happened. . . Excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i See i question here whitin this great poem and that queation is why must the heart feel pain. we'll no one really knows it just does love the words keep it up I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Elizabeth~ Thank you much! Hi Coco~ I'm glad you stopped by to read! Thanks!! Sven~ Thank you for the kind words!! Jeremiah~ Thank you...nice to meet you! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lorraine~ Enjoyed the read of this very much. I understand the pain. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Lloraine, this was beautiful yet sad. the last stanza sums it all up. painful but true expressions from deep within your heart. I enjoyed this read very much! Take care. ~Amy~ "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Marge...Amy Glad you liked. Thank you for reading! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have expressed perfectly the regrets we have so desperately wanting to hold on to the last remnants of love. James |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Thank you, James, for your understanding!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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