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Moving Train |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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i write the story of my life in my poetry write about as it happens then it will stay with me can't forget the friends i've made for soon we too will part can't forget the mistakes i've made or all the broken hearts can't leave out one single scene writing while it's fresh telling tales of lonliness heartache and the rest someday happiness i'll find and write about it i will i write what is on my mind the words flow out at will so if you read my poetry please understand one thing a new life is unfolding before you i'm on a moving train...... Julie :) |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
And what wonderful poems they are, words straight from the heart are always worth writing down dont ever stop  |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you whiskey......it seems a healthy outlet for getting things off my chest!  Julie :) |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
poetry is a great way to vent. i don't know why, but it always works. all my best stuff was written during emotionally unstable times. but once it's on the paper, it's not stuck on your chest. good inspirational work you have here. and it paints a good picture of you as well.< !signature--> We all got somethin' we need to atone for. [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 06-19-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
a new life is unfolding before you i'm on a moving train...... JulieAnn.... thats a great thing to be on.. a moving train...carry on with your life, son, my father always says...never for a moment stay back looking at what you missed, ponder about yesterdays while you move towards tomorrow... is it not so true??? nice poetry, by the way. enjoyed this one, regards, Sudhir |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
That was a very good poem. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Julie~ I LOVED this poem! I loved the theme of the moving train. Great expressions from the heart. And as always you do it with your usual grace and style! Take care, Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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