Open Poetry #8 |
Remain my friend... |
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
My life packed in a suitcase < !signature-->at the foot of my mothers bed i think of US tonight as I rest my weary head though you are lying close to me i feel thousands of miles away you ask me to come back with you but i know i'd never stay so my mind drifts off to what lies ahead to scared to move forward it's lonliness I dread I pour my heart out to strangers the web is my escape strangers who may have answers for none do I have yet.... i love you still you love me though we both know it's not that easy the anger, the bitterness the late night tears grew a space between us over those many years you kiss me tenderly for one last time please don't touch me like that I can't change my mind too mnay harsh words spoken no time for amends so my love go in peace and please remain my friend... Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 06-19-2000).] |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderfully written , Love is so complicated sometimes friendship is all thats left but as long as we hold onto the good times we can grow from it |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JulieAnn~ I hope you can remain friends, that wasn't something I was really good at. When the relationship was over I was done and outta there.But then, I usually had the jerks that you didn't mind getting away from(LOL) Seriously, this is very sad and touched my heart, I wonder if you'll submit it for the book?! -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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