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They Are With Me Still
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They Are With Me Still |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Mass of flesh , bone , and sinew defines not life that runneth through this vessel which recieves the breath of those who have succumbed to death The thoughts of some now long since gone will linger here forever on as fodder for a vacant field their memories will be revealed They doth control this writers pen with relevance which speaks again of those true hearts now gone that sing from un-known parts on angels wings Of them I speak to you this day and rejoice that they've not gone away [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 06-19-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
concise, clear, succinct and perfectly crafted in rhyme and meter love it!!! as always, great writing |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this very much. Good writing.  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dr. Moose Wounderful, very much enjoyed thank you for sharing. Love, Cerenity |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, this is good. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Doreen, We're going to have to stop meeting like this,you know how these people like to start rumors PDV , You wouldn't know it from my few replys , but I'm quite a fan of yours . Thanks for stopping by . Cerenity 1 , I see we not only share a sense of appreciation for outstanding poetry but also a digit .( well at least one of these is true ) LD , I am honored by your assessment.Thank you . Doc |
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