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Why me?
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Why me? |
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*passion-fruit* Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 12 |
Confusion Frustration It's all the same Why does he love her When she's to blame He could do so much better He could do no worse I wish she'd be carried off in a herse Yes, this may sound harsh But he's been hurt by her before I just want to protect him I don't want this to happen anymore He's all grown up I must leave it be He makes his own choices So why did he pick me? |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
What a surprise ending! I was expecting either anger, generousity or self pity Instead, It surmised them all You take Care ~netswan |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I like this poem. Great ending... However, one point... You spell herse hearse... I know how to spell it as a result of being to too many funerals. Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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