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The vow of a kiss
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The vow of a kiss |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The vow of a kiss When you walk the abyss of trance, Where roses show thorns of nuance. You need the noble of the knight, To cut bouquet, the rose in sight. Amour is the energy bed, Soil that suffers and feeds the head. Demanded by physical need, Making it flower and to seed. There you tread a fantasy rope. By a balancing pole of hope. Guided by a candles light, Shimmering in the far of night. Beding in a mutual trust And joining in a burst of lust. It's something like a thrust bouquet, Given in a common display. Walking the tightrope of nuance, Starts with a kiss and then romance. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Amour is the energy bed, Soil that suffers and feeds the head. Demanded by physical need, Making it flower and to seed. There you tread a fantasy rope. By a balancing pole of hope. Guided by a candles light, Shimmering in the far of night. Beding in a mutual trust And joining in a burst of lust. It's something like a thrust bouquet, Given in a common display. -------------- OH MAN!!! now i know why i missed ya so much  you have penned a romantic verse weaving a promise of love's sweet curse a beautiful vow of a kiss... and you already know ... I LOVE WHEN YOU WRITE LIKE THIS!!! later -romantic Sy-gator jm |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful poem , very romantic a joy to read  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such tender treasures await, in your verses... Lovely, Seymour. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I agree, I think a kiss is a very good place to start. The poetry will write itself. Very beautiful Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janet, Thank you Janet, love you too. Meadowmuse, Well its a tender road, Thanks. *L* Whisky, It's always a joy to read your comments. *L* Elizabeth, THank you love. Love Sy |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ain't it the truth? well written, as usual, sy! nice to see you again. hope you enjoyed your trip |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Loved your poem about a kiss, ***smile*** must be something in the air? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Doreen, Had a great time, thanks for the comment. Romantic, There is always something in the air. Thanks for the read. |
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