Open Poetry #8 |
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Mama |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Mama told me One day she'd die But She never told me When Or How much I'd cry. So as i lie to myself Saying She's not gone Old Memories Become Reborn. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is a sad poem. Well written though. -> Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 06-18-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Yes I agree soo sad but well written TC~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Short and Sad -- It is so hard to lose a loved one - ~netswan |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I too, have felt your sorrow. It is always nice to remember through a lovely poem. Take care. Melton |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dear Jeremiah,i am resolving to read every poem of yours cos they are so short and sweet and simple yet contain so much truth ![]() like this one too, esp the line ![]() ![]() |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is such tender reminiscence Jeremiah ... heartfelt emotions expressed very sweetly. Nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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