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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Mama told me One day she'd die But She never told me When Or How much I'd cry. So as i lie to myself Saying She's not gone Old Memories Become Reborn. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is a sad poem. Well written though. -> Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 06-18-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Yes I agree soo sad but well written TC~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Short and Sad -- It is so hard to lose a loved one - ~netswan |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I too, have felt your sorrow. It is always nice to remember through a lovely poem. Take care. Melton |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dear Jeremiah,i am resolving to read every poem of yours cos they are so short and sweet and simple yet contain so much truth  like this one too, esp the line  ld memories become reborn...NICE! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is such tender reminiscence Jeremiah ... heartfelt emotions expressed very sweetly. Nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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