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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Sleep Your voice drifts through my consiousness Your weight envelops me Set adrift in your arms there is no tomorrow or yesterday, there isn't even now. And when it's over I'm sated Finally free. Content as we loosen our tangled bodies and Sleep. [This message has been edited by Jan (edited 06-17-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed your poem. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jan, Great poem for your first post. Wonderful description. Nothing else exists outside of that room. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to Passions!!  Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Jan! What a wonderful poem --- short, to the point and good ~netswan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
What a beautiful description! Welcome to Passions I'll be sure to look for more in the future from you! Thank you for sharing this~ |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Thank you to everyone. I've never shared anything that I have written, so your feedback means a great deal. I love reading everyones poetry and am learning a lot. Thanks again. |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
Short and sweet!  |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice peom , well written , I enjoyed it alot |
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