Open Poetry #8 |
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The blues have gone... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom ![]() |
The blues have gone... they went last night whisked away by pen and mail words I believe and thought were right On waking this morning I smiled at the sun tipped out of bed saw the paper on the floor oh my, what have I done... 12 hours on and still unread my heart is light and free spoke the truth no reservations wipers working in the night cause once again I'm back to me We bandy words back and forth until our eyeballs race so many different ways to read that rely on how we think 1 year on and finally there's a smile on my face... |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Great piece Rainbow...nicely written. (also, glad to know your not blue anymore...but what would a rainbow be without all of her colors???) chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RainbowGirl, This was wonderful. What strength you show. As they saying goes...the truth will set you free. Happy to hear that is true. Sounds like the smile was a long time coming. Good for you. ![]() LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sweetie, you always had a smile on your face..now, you're wearing it right side up!!! Like this one... ![]() |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I KNEW the sky was a little brighter this morning! I thought it was that borealus thingy or something...and all the while it was your smile from way over there! I'm glad, Rainbow. When you're smiling the world is definitely a brighter place ![]() |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Welcome back Rainbow!!!!!! Nice you to see you again! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
GRIN... hey rainbow - nice to have you here...where you belong!! ![]() |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
So glad the blues are gone ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RG~ You have such a beautiful smile too! ![]() Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
big smiles here lady...great poem ![]() |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
That was a very good poem. very poetic |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Rainbow, You are one of the ones I missed while being away sooo long!! I am glad to see you are still around!! What a happy piece!! I agree what would rainbows be without ALL their colors??? As always I likes this!! ![]() Bridgette< !signature--> "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Thanks for allowing me to see your courage its harder to wear your heart on your knib than your sleeve, what a lovely poem Olias |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Ooops...I've got into this dreadful habit of writing my heart out in here and then ending up feeling a bit damp.... I do read the replies but sometimes I just don't know what to say, except the road has been long and the journey a tough one but I've always been one for taking the unknown path and finding some good in it and the good is that the sun still shines whatever the weather! and the strange thing is I put the radio on for the first time this evening and just heard that Eva Cassidy (disceased) will be the subject of a 2 hour show on Saturday....just my flipping luck...why do memories come and hit you right where it hurts! Thanks all HUGS [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rainbow~ Beauty in the smile you possess, glad to see it and with such tender warmth ![]() Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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