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My Plea
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My Plea |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
They say that talk is cheap There are no benefits to reap Hard to tell what is true So I'll try an approach that's new I'll give you the benefit of the doubt Maybe then you won't shout Please give this one last chance You could enjoy the dance Just look with an open mind May be surprised what you find We don't know what may come Could be a lot or just some This whole things makes me sad Her talking to you makes me mad It cuts me like the sharpest knife She does not belong in our life If she had a shred of dignity She would wait for a final divorce decree Before moving in for the kill If it's meant to be it surely will So to her goes this plea As long as he is married to me Won't you please give us space And go without a trace? Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh my. I really liked this one, but there was so much pain in it. I think you expressed it well, though. I've seen so many people in the position you write of here and it is a very painful place to be. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I really liked the entire message of this one....been there, felt it. Excellent work. Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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*passion-fruit* Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 12 |
This is some pretty powerful work!! It sends a message that you put a lot of thought into it. Well, I hope she gets your plea. My hopes for it to work out. Good luck! I'll be sure to read more of your poems. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) I know how hard this must have been to write sweetie, I hope they both listen. I'm here if you need an ear or a shoulder...you are showing renewed strength in your writing...I'm so proud of you for finding the words that are in your heart. **Angel Wing Hugs** my friend~ |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Painful message. But loved it. Wonderful expression of feelings. Best wishes... A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW~ wow, this was very powerful! some intense emotions penned in this one. i am glad to see that you are being able to express them down on paper. i can see a growth in your writing as you are coming to terms with your feelings. take care. ~amy~ "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tennessee Angel....we must deal with those feelings to move on. Thank you for the reply. Peppermint....so sorry to hear that you have been here. Would not wish it on anyone. Passion Fruit....thank you. Do not know there is anything for anyone to hear necessarily. Just venting. BDC....Thank you my friend. Just something I felt I had to do. Hope to catch up to oyu very soon. Mystical Nights...Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed. Amy....I am having many feelings these days. Hard to know what is real anymore. The writing helps...it really does. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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