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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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rain drops on my face mud betwwen my toes i must look pathetic to you standing here begging pleading wishing you would stay dress clinging to my body i wear nohing underneath just the soft caresses you left there moments ago you will return to your happy home you think she doesn't know it isn't you i'm after in my eyes you'll see it's passion that I long for endlessly but bored i'll get i'll move on you'll find another porchlight on did you hear me shivering in the night? wanting someone to hold me tight? is that what brought you to my door? so go if you will beg you I will no more i've got to believe in something more..... Julie :) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
yes, there is something more, something real to be found...liked your poem. Corinne |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed your poem. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautifully expressed. I enjoyed this one. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I agree with Corinne there is something more. a great poem. thanks for sharing. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
yes, can't agree more with the above. Great poem, had my full attention. dress clinging to my body i wear nohing underneath nice image.... must be the man in me...  Parker |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Julie, I loved your poem. Keep up the good writing. ParisGrl |
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