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Open Poetry #8

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Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

0 posted 2000-06-16 01:33 AM

this is my second time posting in open, but no one really read my last so i posted a new one. hope you enjoy. thanks.

if only i wasn't caught in this web of feverous laughs
if only i could escape

my mind full of dreams
caught in masks of decieving faces
none to understand

my hands cannot write enough
for words come shrewdly fast
in veiled outer insainity

my tounge ever silienced
with whips and deadly scorns
beating within my chest

my legs enveloped by a blender of emotion
unable to dismiss the wild shake
that recks in a bitter fashion

my lips drawn to silient motions
for things that should not be kindly said
have exited the innermosts of me

my heart in fear of losing
a friend i never truely befriended
and never could have comprehended

[This message has been edited by Ron (06-25-2011 10:02 AM).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-06-16 05:08 AM

This is ponderous, but a compelling read for me--I could relate on many levels to this. Thank you for the read.

notlikely2
Member

since 2000-06-16

Posts 308
UK

2 posted 2000-06-16 05:32 AM

An interesting poem.
Certainly made me think.

Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you!

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