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Could you be the one for me? (The mending of a broken heart)
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Could you be the one for me? (The mending of a broken heart) |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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Could you be the one for me? Could you be my find? Could it be after all this time, Fate is going to be kind? Could you be the one for me, The one to help me forget The man that broke my heart, my soul The man that haunts me yet? You tell me that I'm beautiful Something I’ve never heard But the one still lives here in my mind That couldn’t spare a kind word It’s going to be hard to forget And pick up the pieces he left Could you be the one to teach How to love again and forget? Could you be the one to come And mend my broken heart? Are you willing to piece together What another broke apart? It won’t be an easy job, you see My road has been long and rough And the heart that was once so soft Is now shut, locked, and tough But I can feel my heart open again It’s opening for you Just come in, and love me back That’s all you have to do I must ask you one small thing Before we kiss and part Please be nice and kind to be I’m tired of broken hearts "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
really very lovely the honesty you've spoken touched me... i could feel this poem and identify with it thank you for posting this |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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Thanks so much for your wonderful reply, Doreen!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you have a big heart it seems yuh and those are the best for pourin out lovely poetry as this o yuh |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
could he be the one for you, The one to mend your heart? Or will he choose the game to play, And make you fall apart. I've had the pain you carry, deep inside my soul. But don't sit home and worry, soon it will turn cold. The heart is warm, love knows no fear. stick around and play his game, but later don't cry a tear. The heart will mend itself. miriam coronado |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was beautifully penned Lovebug ... such emotion could be felt between the wants and fears ... very well written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love Bug thank you for writing this beautiful poem for I also want exactly the same wish as you. You have described the emotions and feelings perfectly. Hoping for you that this is the healing you have been searching for. James |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
very touching poem....broken hearts are indeed hard to mend....but they will mend eventually....just hang in there and let the love be proven to you!!  Julie :) |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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Thank you all for your wonderful replies. They mean the world to me! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
How much I can relate to this is scary . I'm going through the same thing right now, I tried to write a poem expressing it, but couldn't. This was beautifully done and I hope he is the one!  ~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Could he be the one, The one to be with you. I hope he is the one Who makes your dreams come true. This is a lovely poem, Erica. The emotion is so strong and conflicting. Beautifully expressed. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
LoveBug, Lovely verse this, beautifully portrayed honest emotions.... Regards, sudhir |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Nicely done LoveBug, and good luck to you. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem,I like it a lot. |
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