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Mist So Beautiful
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Mist So Beautiful |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Mist So Beautiful It appears as if Gods fingers are rambling through the mountains, as the fog penetrates the valleys below. Feeling the earth with gentle touch roaming at free will, filling all lower terrain with a billowy white wet mist coming endlessly forward. Collecting in its memory the patterns of the earth following paths well penetrated before on previous trips, moving onward to add new ground never before touched. The mountain tops stand majestically tall above this awesome sight, soaking in to its base this traveling mist forever will leave some of its glory behind to give to nature and help replenish doing its part in the grand scheme of life and the cycle in which it was created. As the sun comes forward the fog retreats back to where it came, leaving a trail of thankful earth in dampened delight and a memory I shall cherish always upon my mind. God did come and touch something, he touched my heart with his magnificent glory seen in this mist so beautiful to the eye and I give him praise. By, Cerenity |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
The mountain tops stand majestically tall above this awesome sight, soaking in to its base this traveling mist forever will leave some of its glory behind to give to nature and help replenish doing its part in the grand scheme of life and the cycle in which it was created. the beauty of this poem has me in awe, what a stunning and wonderful picture you painted. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Wow, beautiful poem Cerenity ! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A very beautifully expressed poem, cerenity, glad I read this one... regards, sudhir |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi everyone, Thank you for your kind replys, I wish everybody could have seen this for them selves it was so beautiful it really hits you when you see things like this, reminds me of the love God has for us, showing his love through the beauty of the earth. Love, Cerenity |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Majestic poem, simply beautiful and so picturesque ... wonderful Cerenity! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very picturesque and good use of metaphor in here. Nice work Cerenity. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity, my friend~ You painted a picture so real I feel as if I am standing on the top of your mountain ... awaiting the rise of the sun. 'As the sun comes forward the fog retreats' Beautifully said. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
*Miss Cerenity* This is a maginficent view you have shared with me today!! God smiled on you with your gift to write~and you share it beautifully. Thank you! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you so much for such sweet replys, it is so nice to have such good friends, I have been blessed with all of you. Love, Cerenity |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
breathtaking imagery, Cerenity this is a gorgeous poem!!! wonderful work take care, jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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