Open Poetry #8 |
Sweet Kisses (by my daughter her first) |
Zion Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 33Melbourne Australia |
Sweet kisses To the angel of death as I dance in the flames of passion For just one moment close your eyes Feel the warmth suround you And Know I send you a thousand sweet soft kisses Feel the soothing flow of love I send through a warm embrace Surrender to the love I offer Let me take all your pain and sorrow And replace it with well being and a love so deep you will no longer feel you have to deal with hardship by your self ever again Let me be there to soothe your worries away Allow me to enfold you in a life long embrace To love and hold you I surrender my soul to you It is yours now and forever I offer you unconditional lovethat flows only for you If it is not your arms I can beheld in I will wander the earthwith total abandonment of love it's self For love will have lost it's meaning without you to share it with me May the Angels bless me and show you the way to me I only pray that they hear my call of love to you and allow us to be together |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is very beautiful poem! I think you should put your daughter's name under it. She has done very well with her first poem! I think it should go back up to the top! Give her these smiles from me. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
My congrtas to your daughter Zion...get her registered...now more of your own please never say never |
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Zion Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 33Melbourne Australia |
thank you Insect and Paula I have passed on your words of encouragement but at the present moment she hasn't the time to write as she would like |
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