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Zion
Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 33
Melbourne Australia

0 posted 2000-07-30 09:36 AM


Sweet kisses
To the angel of death
as I dance
in the flames of passion


For just one moment close your eyes
Feel the warmth suround you
And Know I send you a thousand sweet soft kisses
Feel the soothing flow of love
I send through a warm embrace

Surrender to the love I offer
Let me take all your pain and sorrow
And replace it with well being
and a love so deep you will no longer feel
you have to deal with hardship by your self ever again

Let me be there to soothe your worries away
Allow me to enfold you in a life long embrace
To love and hold you

I surrender my soul to you
It is yours now and forever
I offer you unconditional lovethat flows only for you

If it is not your arms I can beheld in
I will wander the earthwith total abandonment
of love it's self
For love will have lost it's meaning without you
to share it with me

May the Angels bless me and
show you the way to me
I only pray that they hear my call of love to you
and allow us to be together

© Copyright 2000 Zion - All Rights Reserved
insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-07-30 10:14 AM


This is very beautiful poem!
I think you should put your daughter's name under it.
She has done very well with her first poem!
I think it should go back up to the top!
Give her these smiles from me.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2000-07-30 11:08 AM


My congrtas to your daughter Zion...get her registered...now more of your own please

never say never

Zion
Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 33
Melbourne Australia
3 posted 2000-07-31 02:10 PM


thank you Insect and Paula
I have passed on your words of encouragement but at the present moment she hasn't the time to write as she would like

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