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Flowers In The Sky |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Flowers In The Sky Flowers in the sky, sparkling dew, reflections in my eye, far across the universe, that's how it flies, my love for you, a cosmic burst. Happiness is total bliss, sadness is never missed, my love for you like ruby roses, throbbing, throbbing, my heart knows this. Fast across the nighttime sky, starburst streak, lovers happily point and cry, such beauty to this earth bound eye. Cupids arrow, potion tipped, let fly, let fly, moonstruck lovers, watching time go by, and by. Love and live, laugh and cry, what more could you want, before you die; flowers in the sky, starburst, moonlight, you and I… oh my, oh my. w. james beard, jr. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ A splendid starburst of emotion. 'Fast across the nighttime sky, starburst streak, lovers happily point and cry, such beauty to this earth bound eye' Hold fast to the star - worth a wish ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thank you Marge...I loved "Feather Me" BTW. Been wishing on stars since I knew what they were. Hmph! Haven't done me any good yet, though! (I don't think...anyway -whispered). jwesley |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Grasp ahold of that star and follow it's trail through the heavens.....beautiful write and the imagery is splendid.  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks Mark, for your time and comment. jwesley |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Well this is another great one from you! Enjoyed this read Have to put this flower back up in the sky |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Admiring your style here. This is so amazingly beautiful of you. Truly a poem to cherish. I love the Flowers in the sky. Bravo. Be well J. *Peace. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my oh my is right... jw this is lovely and perfect... wonderful celestial imagery laced thru the emotions.. loved the anticipation and adoration at the end... enjoyed this muchly me friend  take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Insect, thanks, flowers are wonderful no matter where they are, aren't they? Spitfire, "admiring my style" - wow, coming from you whose style I admire, is a real compliment to me. Mucho thanks. And JM, my friend, whom I admire...period, thank you so much. jwesley |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
I find myself admiring this style as well. That was really was beautiful...and a great great flow. Tony |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Amazingly tender and beautiful....absolutely loved this one! |
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