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Ask myself |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, 
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I never thought it would be this way, But I lie lost in what i feel today, Becuase I cant change the things you say, That break my heart so softly. Hopes dont fall as one would think, Crashing to the floor, But float above, just in case, I let you in once more. Pian doesnt stab as once described, But lives somewhere deep inside, Breathing still with ever tear, Becuase I choose to keep you here. Somehow the silence doesnt sleep, Yet wakes me in the night, To turn to you and fall apart, Knowing that I am right. Tears arent warm as they spill, But freeze my love in place, As you stare into my eyes, And lie striaght to my face. I cannot change the things youve done, I no longer can be strong, I only wish to ask myself, How did i make it this long? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hopes dont fall as one would think, Crashing to the floor, But float above, just in case, I let you in once more. Pian doesnt stab as once described, But lives somewhere deep inside, Breathing still with ever tear, Becuase I choose to keep you here. Somehow the silence doesnt sleep, Yet wakes me in the night, To turn to you and fall apart, Knowing that I am right. So tender is the heart consumed in love. It makes it so much harder to start down that path of a new promise. Great read and wonderful imagery. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
May I say... nice to see you and I miss you. Don't stay away so long. It's rubbing off on me. love & prayers |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
thank you both so much and yes lucky i miss you to i miss everyone here but latley i just bottle everything inside and keep it to myself. not a good thing to do i know. thank you! |
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kalybo New Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 6 |
I really enjoyed reading this poem, but it hurt me... It triggered old memories. Well done! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amber~ Sorry to see the hurt ..... visit us more often. Write more .... you know it helps. 'Sides that .... we miss you !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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