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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Shadowland He calls to only me so quietly so soft come and I ache with aches indescribable, the pain so freshly wrought he cries out to me beseeching so quietly come to me in shadows he stands I reach and fail to reach and shed silent tears weeping only he hears come to me my love and would I do anything give anything lose everything to once again hie to him come to me Yes I would, I would sacrifice all to once again lay in his arms hear his heart beat touch warm skin come O my love… ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 29 July 2000 |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
truly mournful. great view into a couple of life's darker moments. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, If that doesn't get him nothing will *L* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
beowulf...exactly...thank you... Sy, so where are you? LOL! Thanks!... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, a very emotional piece wonderfully written. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful sentiments of mourning. Strong, deep and from the heart. Well done!!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sunshine... This is so sad...the yearning, the ache.....oh, I feel the hurt!! I still am a big fan of Yours!!!!!!! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, Mark, Sunny1...exactly what I was attempting to achieve...thank you all... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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