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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-07-28 10:51 PM


Everything was just alright,
today I felt a cool breeze kiss.
I lost my troubles, smiled real wide--
but something ached, something amiss...

Cold brewski
stinging
my hot throat,
cool jazz,
to soothe
my scorching soul.
Then I took
to reminiscing,
and filled the well
with all my wishing--
empty pocket,
no more gold.
The sun went down,
and I grew old...

Just like a train
came roaring through
(clack-a-lack)
cuts me in two--
(clack-a-lack)
it screams of you...
Train take me back
(let's burn this tune...)

Now the howlin' wolf sings true:
serenity has got duh blues...



© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-07-29 01:03 AM


but something ached, something amiss...
==================
cool jazz,
to soothe
my scorching soul.
Then I took
to reminiscing,
and filled the well
with all my wishing--
empty pocket,
no more gold.
The sun went down,
and I grew old...

======================

Now the howlin' wolf sings true:
serenity has got duh blues...
=======================

but you look so lovely in blue...
shows off your eyes...

sing it for me baby...
oh my you sing my tune in this
longing little diddy me sweet...
time for a lullabye
*kiss kiss*
me love ya blue baby  
me


tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-07-29 01:33 AM


Serenity's got da blues
heart aching so
Serenity's got da blues
wishing aching heart would go

Blue Blues
let them drift away
Tell those blue blues
Please come back another day

Sorry serenity lame I know but all I could come up with in a hurry and the lameness will give ya a bit of a chuckle anyway  
Love Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-07-29 09:24 AM


Janet Marie---aw, c'mon and sing for me!!!
              thank with grins for m'twin!

Tracie 66-----you've got it!  We used to do
              this all the time--called it
              "circle blues--" and everybody
              took a verse...was quite a
              funny mess sometimes, but it
              sure did cure the blues!!!

Anybody else care to take a verse?

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2000-07-29 09:54 AM


Yeah Howlin Wolf he sings the blues
he's  been singin in your muse.
When he plays the fever comes
right from the heart where blues is from.
Now you're playin with them notes
that soothe your mind and heal your woes
while Howlin Wolf plays the blues
you take that potion that he brews.


Yeah that is fun let me know what you end up with.......take care... ethome..


brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
5 posted 2000-07-29 09:56 AM


Serenity got the Blues
sinking in frown
I can't dig the blues tunes
but I also got music to fit my mood
Mr Ian Curtis keeps in misery hotel,
I think its time we both checked out
to a drive to the rainbow
cruising the highway from hell
Serenity's got the Blues
some one find the lady some uplifting tunes.



Your poem was the business...real cool.


"A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-07-29 10:43 AM


my sweet baby sen has got the blues
hear her plea ... this song from her muse
I'm here to chase those blues away
I'm taking you out into the sunshine to play
We'll walk in the garden...we'll hug a tree  
we'll drink raspberry tea and write poetry
we'll listen to music and sit in the shade ...
share secrets and smiles till the sun does fade
we'll light some candles as the sun goes down
then put on our dancing shoes...hit the streets...
cause...
"ITS SO DAMN HARD TO BE GOOD IN THIS TOWN"
(hehe) *winkie winkie*

motto of the day:
lets give em something to talk about  
later me sweet-gator
*blowing kisses to the south*
and ya know...if i ever do come there...
were gonna make Thelma and Louise look like
amatures...   
OH BABY  LOL LOL

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

7 posted 2000-07-29 11:44 AM




(hehe) me so bad today...

hey i dont have blonde hair
do you me twin (hehehehe)
rhetorical question to ask a twin  

too much tea me thinks... and the day aint half over  

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

8 posted 2000-07-29 11:48 AM


Janet Marie!!!  Stop posting my picture all over the *%#! internet!!!
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
9 posted 2000-07-29 12:35 PM


great write..can see that train

never say never

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