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Duh Blues
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Duh Blues |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Everything was just alright, today I felt a cool breeze kiss. I lost my troubles, smiled real wide-- but something ached, something amiss... Cold brewski stinging my hot throat, cool jazz, to soothe my scorching soul. Then I took to reminiscing, and filled the well with all my wishing-- empty pocket, no more gold. The sun went down, and I grew old... Just like a train came roaring through (clack-a-lack) cuts me in two-- (clack-a-lack) it screams of you... Train take me back (let's burn this tune...) Now the howlin' wolf sings true: serenity has got duh blues... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but something ached, something amiss... ================== cool jazz, to soothe my scorching soul. Then I took to reminiscing, and filled the well with all my wishing-- empty pocket, no more gold. The sun went down, and I grew old... ====================== Now the howlin' wolf sings true: serenity has got duh blues... ======================= but you look so lovely in blue... shows off your eyes...  sing it for me baby... oh my you sing my tune in this longing little diddy me sweet... time for a lullabye *kiss kiss* me love ya blue baby me |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Serenity's got da blues heart aching so Serenity's got da blues wishing aching heart would go Blue Blues let them drift away Tell those blue blues Please come back another day Sorry serenity lame I know but all I could come up with in a hurry and the lameness will give ya a bit of a chuckle anyway  Love Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Janet Marie---aw, c'mon and sing for me!!! thank with grins for m'twin! Tracie 66-----you've got it! We used to do this all the time--called it "circle blues--" and everybody took a verse...was quite a funny mess sometimes, but it sure did cure the blues!!! Anybody else care to take a verse? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yeah Howlin Wolf he sings the blues he's been singin in your muse. When he plays the fever comes right from the heart where blues is from. Now you're playin with them notes that soothe your mind and heal your woes while Howlin Wolf plays the blues you take that potion that he brews. Yeah that is fun let me know what you end up with.......take care... ethome.. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Serenity got the Blues sinking in frown I can't dig the blues tunes but I also got music to fit my mood Mr Ian Curtis keeps in misery hotel, I think its time we both checked out to a drive to the rainbow cruising the highway from hell Serenity's got the Blues some one find the lady some uplifting tunes.  Your poem was the business...real cool. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my sweet baby sen has got the blues hear her plea ... this song from her muse I'm here to chase those blues away I'm taking you out into the sunshine to play We'll walk in the garden...we'll hug a tree we'll drink raspberry tea and write poetry we'll listen to music and sit in the shade ... share secrets and smiles till the sun does fade we'll light some candles as the sun goes down then put on our dancing shoes...hit the streets... cause... "ITS SO DAMN HARD TO BE GOOD IN THIS TOWN" (hehe) *winkie winkie* motto of the day: lets give em something to talk about  later me sweet-gator *blowing kisses to the south* and ya know...if i ever do come there... were gonna make Thelma and Louise look like amatures...   OH BABY LOL LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 (hehe) me so bad today... hey i dont have blonde hair do you me twin (hehehehe) rhetorical question to ask a twin too much tea me thinks... and the day aint half over |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Janet Marie!!! Stop posting my picture all over the *%#! internet!!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
great write..can see that train never say never |
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