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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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~*~Someone~*~ There is someone I love more then words could say, he brightens up my day in his own little precious way. And I thank god he will never go away. He is someone that was sent from above, to come and share all of our love. As beautiful as a flower but as perfect as a dove. A sweet little voice that can be heard for miles, he is someone that can always make me smile. **This is dedicated to my nephew..Anthony. who i love more then words could say... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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kris_aka_warmhrt Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
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This is a "cute" poem, but are you sure you posted it in the right forum? This is CA, where poems are sometimes torn apart, sliced and diced, or given a thorough copy and paste job, all in the pursuit of becoming a better poet. I would suggest that this poem was more suitable to the Open forum, where comments are made, not critiques. Kris |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
opps sorry... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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