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Kyle aka Huck
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0 posted 2000-07-28 11:41 AM


I asked her out,
She said YES without a doubt.
Made me smile,
I longed for that a while.
How my heart did ache,
The chain we finally did break.
Let go of our fears,
Now just very happy tears.
One day I'm sure we'll get married,
All the bad times will be burried.
Love her with all my soul and heart,
Have right from the start.
Always will,
Her love is such a wonderful thrill.
This is MY happiness,
What's yours?


I wrote this bout my g/f, we broke up and i was afraid to ask her back out even though i knew she wanted to i still couldnt do it but i did yesterday after a month apart and she said yes before i could finish askin her and thats my happiness, my g/f Jessie =o)


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1 posted 2000-07-28 11:56 AM


Awesome and touching poem bro. Keep it up!!!  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-07-28 03:22 PM


Enjoyed the poem...happiness is being admired and accepted with no conditions...James
MMoonchild
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3 posted 2000-07-28 07:08 PM


very very sweet and  I am sure she is as happy as you that you  asked...
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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