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Happiness |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
I asked her out, She said YES without a doubt. Made me smile, I longed for that a while. How my heart did ache, The chain we finally did break. Let go of our fears, Now just very happy tears. One day I'm sure we'll get married, All the bad times will be burried. Love her with all my soul and heart, Have right from the start. Always will, Her love is such a wonderful thrill. This is MY happiness, What's yours? I wrote this bout my g/f, we broke up and i was afraid to ask her back out even though i knew she wanted to i still couldnt do it but i did yesterday after a month apart and she said yes before i could finish askin her and thats my happiness, my g/f Jessie =o) |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Awesome and touching poem bro. Keep it up!!!  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed the poem...happiness is being admired and accepted with no conditions...James |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
very very sweet and I am sure she is as happy as you that you asked... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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