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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
 My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. m.a. [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-28-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
the turns we take along life's path head down roads to the unknown never sure what the future holds so many diversions to blind us so few bright oracles to follow weaving a meandering alone ever wary the danger's loom making decision to soon nothing wants to guide us swirling avenues about time begins its ticking gnawing at our lives stopping progression narrowing a never return to comforts slowed forever round 'n round down again nausea ensues stopping going's life even insane to ones safe end ..... MA Miller, What dark words!... and such a form... you sure you don't have a twisted mind  Anyway, enjoyed this one immensely (aw, the neck hurts  )Regards, sudhir P.S. one blemish - a little typo on the "too soon" bit eighth line as I wrote it... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A remarkable presentation, M.A. and quite aptly titled. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The message was good enough to stand alone, but your presentation was really clever, mark, and after reading, I think my neck actually feels a bit better! |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks Sudhir (i fixed the "too") ... just a fun piece without much substance ... thanks Meadowmuse and serenity (now get those neck braces back on) [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-28-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
you would'nt believe the time I had spinning that moniter round and round....greatwork! ..dizzy.. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wow...wonderful piece both in word and presentation. God I wish I new that Sudhir had written it out normally and I now wouldn't have a stiff neck....LOL  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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