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To Change Or Not To Change?
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To Change Or Not To Change? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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To Change Or Not To Change I've dyed my hair And changed my nose I've lost the weight I've struck the pose I've swiched my friends And altered my speach I've bought a mobile I've extended my reach You're still the one Who broke my heart You lied and cheated You blew me apart You've not changed You're still the same Thinking I'll return To play your game Which proves one thing For once and all That You never ever Knew Me at all |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes I went thru this not so long ago...she does think its all a game...for her part she can do anything she wants for a year and a half and then decide to come back to me and I'll be waiting for her...it takes two to play that game and I declined...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
That's it exactly James, some people float through life thinking they're the only ones who matter! Oh how wrong they are!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
the answer is...not to change!  if you change everything for the happiness of someone else..you lose who you really are...i've been there too..well, i still have my same nose.. LOL good one marsha dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Wow, sounds like you're better off without this person, what a nice poem! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha, The verses really portray that you had tried your very best, but alas, a one way street. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is great! I wrote one a while ago and this has much the same feel...it's a shame when they never know the inside...that's where it counts and that's what should never change...for anyone! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee as usual your insight is a blessing, thank you!  Toddles sometimes wanting isn't enough, but then sometimes nothing would be enough.  Bill Thank you, I'm glad the feelings came through  Buterflies dc, Thank you for your imput. Could you E me your old poem, so I can read it I'd really like to. |
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