Open Poetry #8 |
The Garden Gate |
Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
for Ta-rel Come with me to the garden gate And let us pass within Where we shall smell the sweet perfume And we shall see the roses bloom That blossom here again And I will kiss your precious lips And look into your eyes We'll sit beside the garden stream And speak of one-another's dreams Beneath the starry skies Along the garden paths we'll walk Together hand in hand And we will dance beneath the moon Until the day breaks all too soon Across the shadowed land And as the morning greets us In this garden of delight I'll pluck for you a single rose The garden gate again I'll close Until we meet tonight |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ian~ This is lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*big sigh* this was very nice! ~Heather |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How romantic...to dance in the garden beneath the moon...beautiful never say never |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Ian, this is simply beautiful. Looking forward to more of your work. Take care, Juls |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very very romantic rendevous...I'd say well done! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and this is the perfect date...enchanting...like a sweet misty dream. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely images you have created...James |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Thank you all, this is one of my personal favorites. Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
and with good reason.. it is lovely Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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