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Mending Broken Wings
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Mending Broken Wings |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
We will fly in the wind,on broken wings Mended by love,yet never the same. Past pain,not forgotten,but learned from, and cherished. For without it this new love might never have been. So starting as friends, we'll take one step at a time Building on trust, taking our time. Setbacks we'll have, tears we will shed, But well worth the cost,whatever the pain. So fly in the wind,these wings worn and battered. Learning again that love's a great healer Chancing it all for that look in our eyes. Flying,yes flying,on wings ever stronger, As love lifts us up and sets us to flight. never say never |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
I loved it Paula. Past pain I've tried to bury but its impossible. It'll linger till everything is erased by the hands of my lover. Sincerely A_L |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
As love lifts us up and sets us to flight ... WOW Great poem here, Paula... regards, sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Learning again that love's a great healer." Mending those broken wings to fly again eh Paula. Well I think you're doing a fab job here of describing how it's going to work. Hope the love heals for good this time. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
A_L...yes a lovers touch is just whats needed thanks Sudhir...thank you I am glad you liked it. maybe someday ethome but for now Im grounded. never say never |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Lift off is tomorrow !  The first day of the rest of your flight !! Sweet thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Don't let the winds of yesterday keep you from the gentle breezes of tomorrow. Great read and well defined. Keep up that hope and spread those wings. |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Paula, you write so gently. Thanks for the lift! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
It takes time to mend......but when they do..they work better than before Great work Paula~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...well maybe a little gliding for a while Mark...I am trying Trew...always happy to see you friend. Bdc...thank you and i hope so. never say never |
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