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Colours in my Clouds
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Colours in my Clouds |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Colours in my Clouds My stumbling feet are always in a tangle You take my hand like a dancing angel Dancing colours in my clouds of Grey Blowing away pain with what you say Your colours reach out to this heart of mine My heart is the sky where your heart will shine Open blue skies are clearly love's power Raindrops are kisses in a stormy shower Lightning numbs my body's soul Thunder is the voice that makes us whole Hail will fall when we are apart Love is a vortex that forums in my heart Warm air rising are thoughts of you Cold air mixing into a tornado so true F-5 twister is the name of my pain A longing of love spinning me insane Waiting for the return of your clear blue sky Precipitating clouds moisten loves eye Your presence is a rainbow a bridge to my love You are love's colours in my sky above |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Hot, Awesome, Great poem. You have used nature in a way in which I have to yet to see. Keep it up!!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, Good morning, I will never forget the following sentence from your poem, especially when it rains. Wow, this is romantic. "Raindrops are kisses in a stormy shower" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Insect, My apologies, it seems that I have mixed up names. I think that i am still asleep this morning. Comments though, still stand. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
insect this piece rocks, its one of my fav's of yours so far. Wonderful imagery. Parker |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
nice work here, insect ... fav line ... Dancing colours in my clouds of Grey Blowing away pain with what you say |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Xeonox…Nature is a powerful force and goes good with poetry! Thank you for the reply Bill Charles…Thanks and thanks again! It almost reads like a sunny morning! LOL Haleyja…That's fantastic thank you! MA Miller…Thank you very much for reading and the reply! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My stumbling feet are always in a tangle You take my hand like a dancing angel Dancing colours in my clouds of Grey Blowing away pain with what you say Your colours reach out to this heart of mine My heart is the sky where your heart will shine Open blue skies are clearly love's power Raindrops are kisses in a stormy shower Lightning numbs my body's soul Thunder is the voice that makes us whole Hail will fall when we are apart Love is a vortex that forums in my heart ================== insect this is a very cool poem, romanctic and lots of strong imagery very nice read sir-bug  later-weather-man-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Thank you Janet Marie   You inspired me to write, "Scattered kisses" |
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