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Ssshh.... (a finger's hush)
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Ssshh.... (a finger's hush) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Ssshh... I place a finger's hush upon your cleft of lip... hold me now, and sing soft songs, tell me tales of sparkled gold, kiss me sweet upon my brow and trail your fingers-- fairy rings... shivers raised in love's soft wake... Amulets protect me now perfume of intensity exotic in its mingle, perfect touch, of perfect lips, eyes the shade of drown... Velvet brushing velvet crushing velvet --self forgot... awakened in this slash and burn- to have what I cannot. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
eyes of drown i likes that yuh what yuh cannot o yuh in yur writin sen yuh got it all!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Always seem to want what we can't have don't we?  Damn the luck!Good one!!! Ya' know, they say that angel put their fingers to your lips and whispered shhh! (that's the cleft) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you much walt...always a hug to hear from you...I thank you... and YES...'becca...I did know that...thank you for "getting" it...that's always fun...love ya much... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Awesome work.......you penned it so very well..what we want but cannot have is always so very sweet and aluring.....I didn't know about the angel thing...very cool!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleSerenity~ 'eyes the shade of drown' Oh, YES ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks butterflies---I'm glad that you enjoy---makes me happy---and I've always loved that angel story.... Marge---you are the best...thank you much. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful. We all fall into this at some point. I do have my dreams though.  Loved this alot and the timing well...... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ssshh... I place a finger's hush upon your cleft of lip... hold me now, and sing soft songs, tell me tales of sparkled gold, kiss me sweet upon my brow and trail your fingers-- fairy rings... shivers raised in love's soft wake ===================== eyes the shade of drown... Velvet brushing velvet crushing velvet --self forgot... awakened in this slash and burn- to have what I cannot. ===================== well always late and over-dressed (or is in under-dressed) either way... im finally here... this is lovely me twin.. reads like a soft whisper and that line..."eyes the shade of drown" OH MAN!! oh my how i wish id of thought of that one... mmm mmm mmm you keep this up and were gonna know your a poet *kiss kiss* me |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Serenity, Oh, I hate wanting what I cannot have!! Isn't that always the way? Then we get what we want and we don't want it anymore!! LOL. Some day we will learn!! NOT!!! I like this style a lot. Very nice writing. Soft, sweet, sensual. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh I like that......."eyes the shade of drown," Serenity this is very sensually intense...really good writing! |
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