Learn To Dance Or Not (Repost #6)

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Learn To Dance Or Not (Repost #6)

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-07-25 11:46 PM

Learn To Dance Or Not

There are few consistencies
in life, one we can count on is
the rising and setting of the sun,
even the blossom on the vine may
come forth before their time, upsetting
the balance in their nature.

As we beings with superior
knowledge go through our life's
coarse we are unable to predict
with any amount of accuracy in
which way to walk, yet we only
live to succeed in our visions of life
and to gain the many things we
perceive we cannot live without.

Lilly's toil and spin about
with only the garment God
gave them, how do we as humans
come to need so much and care
or value life so little.

By the way
there is another constancy and that
is death, may we learn to dance
before it is to late.

By, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Xeonox

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since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-07-26 01:25 AM

Awesome usuage of words to explain an idea. It is sad that we must act this way. Great poem!!!

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-07-26 01:53 PM

"dance, sister, dance..." absolutely.

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2000-07-26 08:05 PM

Xeonox and Serenity

Thank you both so much for your kind replys, I know this is a repost but I am having such a brain dead time lately with my writting, flat liner.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-07-26 11:48 PM

May I have this dance? Wonderful words of inspiration. We should make the most of each day and you have given us a sweet reminder of that.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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5 posted 2004-05-23 09:21 PM

excellent!

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