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Lovers Perhaps
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovers Perhaps Now that she's gone and I reach for someone new I can only hope for the best as I reach my arms out to you. How could I not enjoy this tender embrace as our lips touch together so warm and tenderly placed. I want you and I need you my thoughts race with the time. Can I trust you and will I do my feelings echo in rhyme. I feel uncertain for sure if not wantonly wanting perhaps and always hoping for the spark of Love to fall into our laps. Whatever feelings may come into play my heart will reach out and caress in hopes they may endure forever and never forget your tenderness. If my desire for Love is all just a dream a fantasy not truly meant to be well we will be friends for sure it seems or lovers perhaps, yes, that would work for me. Jameslee@July25,2000 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James....WOW...that works for me. never say never |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Tenderly honest James....the biggest point that I took from this is taking what is offered and not turining it into something else...very wise advice. Great writing~ |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
James fantastic, what a poem, truth and honesty, with just a smidgin of hope. Magic! I like this a lot.!!  [This message has been edited by Beverley (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Tender is the key word, yes... James, well done... enjoyed reading this... regards, sudhir |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, this a very soft and wanting poem. Every looks for what you are looking for. You expressed your search for this person wonderfully. I am once again in awe of the expression of emotions. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Paula, Butterfly, Beverly, Sudhir, and Marina for your nice comments...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tender,open and honest. Well done James. None of us really know where a relationship will go when we enter into it but honesty is the key and you have captured it well. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Mark...I appreciate your nice response...James |
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