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louisianasweetie
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0 posted 2000-07-25 06:46 AM


You came to me in my dreams
so sweet, kind, sexy, and thoughtful
We lay underneath a stary sky,
holding eachother tightly

Then we made sweet, passionate love all night long
it was the best thing anyone could possibly ask for

The love we have,
the love we shared,
it is the greatest!

I just want to feel like this for eternity
But it is not possible until I know our love is for real.


[This message has been edited by louisianasweetie (edited 07-25-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-07-25 06:58 AM


Hi and welcome to Passions

How about "Love's Fear" for a title?

looking forward to reading more of your work

louisianasweetie
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2 posted 2000-07-25 07:18 AM


Thanks for the help with the name.  I hope everyone who reads this poem will enjoy it.

Live life to it's fullest, because one day you will be gone and you might regret not having done the things you've wanted to.



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