Open Poetry #8 |
~Turn On The Music~ ... (Turn It Up Loud) |
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
**dedicated to music... dedicated to Jackson Browne and Van Morrison... whose music was my first true poetic inspiration. They are poets first ... ~Turn On The Music~ Turn on the music ... let it carry me away, God, I love the way it feels ... please let the music play. Turn it up LOUD ... I want to feel the songs run thru my spine, I want to feel every note ... make each word become mine. Turn it up louder ... I want to feel the base surge right thru me, I want to taste the rhythm ... touch the sweet harmony. Sitting in front of the speakers ... feel those vibrations run up thru my chest, crank it up louder at the guitar solo ... that's the part I like best. Spare me all the lectures ... I've heard them all thru the years, I'm not turning it down ... those words indeed -- fall on deaf ears. Music is my religion, like poetry ... my only other saving grace, let the melody wash over me ... all my cares leave without a trace. So sing my heart once again Jackson ... your songs take me home, for so many years now ... for your words ... I'm never alone. Serenade me Van ... take me with you in to those mystical skies, with in your magical lyric ... all my hopes and dreams lie. Sing to me your verses ... your poetry put to song, sing to me your secrets ... your words have helped to keep me strong. My one true constant ... my quiet comfort on those long, lonely, nights, your words held my heart ... and for a while, made the world seem right. So turn on the music ... then turn it up loud so I can hear every last word, no matter how many times I've played it before, when my "brown eyed poets" sing to me ... it's still the most beautiful song I've ever heard. Janet Marie ************** ~LATE FOR THE SKY~ Jackson Browne Now the words had all been spoken And somehow the feeling still wasn't right And still we continued on through the night Tracing our steps from the beginning Until they vanished into the air Trying to understand How our lives has lead us there Looking hard into your eyes There was nobody I'd ever known Such an empty surprise To feel so alone Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be Awake again I can't pretend And I know I'm alone And close to the end Of the feeling we've known How long have I been sleeping How long have I been drifting alone through the night How long have I've dreaming I could make it right If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might To be the one you need Awake again I can't pretend And I know I'm alone And close to the end Of the feeling we've known How long I've been sleeping How long have I been drifting alone through the night How long have I been running for that morning flight Through the whispered promises and the changing light In the bed where we both lie Late for the sky ************* ~Into the Mystic~ Van Morrison We were born before the wind Also younger than the sun Ere the bonnie boat was won as we sailed into the mystic Hark, now hear the sailors cry Smell the sea and feel the sky Let your soul and spirit fly into the mystic And when that fog horn blows I will be coming home And when that fog horn blows I want to hear it I don't have to fear it I want to rock your gypsy soul Just like way back in the days of old Then magnificently we will float into the mystic And when that fog horn blows you know I will be coming home And when thst fog horn whistle blows I got to hear it I don't have to fear it I want to rock your gypsy soul Just like way back in the days of old And together we will float into the mystic Come on girl... ***** ~THE TIMES YOU'VE COME~ In the time we've known That we each are a part of one another We've lost as much as we have won And as our lives have grown We have found that it only brings us pain To hang on to the things that we have done Still I love the times you've come When you went away Taking all that I'd built my false road on I dropped my life and couldn't find the pieces Now you come and go And it's hard but I feel my strength returning We'll see how far this road reaches You see a little more each time you come Now everybody's gonna tell you it's not worth it Everybody's gotta show you their own pain You might try to find your way up around it But the need for love will still remain Now we're lying here So safe in the ruins of our pleasures Laughter marks the place where we have fallen And our lives are near So it wouldn't occur to us to wonder Is this the past or the future that is calling... Still ... I love the times you've come ... ~Jackson~ ***** ~These Are The Days~ These are the days of the endless summer These are the days, the time is now There is no past, there's only future There's only here, there's only now Oh your smiling face, your gracious presence The fires of spring are kindling bright Oh the radiant heart and the song of glory Crying freedom in the night These are the days by the sparkling river His timely grace and our treasured find This is the love of the one magician Turned the water into wine These are days of the endless dancing and the Long walks on the summer night These are the days of the true romancing When I'm holding you oh, so tight These are the days by the sparkling river His timely grace and our treasured find This is the love of the one great magician Turned water into wine These are the days now that we must savour And we must enjoy as we can These are the days that will last forever You've got to hold them in your heart. ~Van~ the man |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well, if you had neighbors like mine you couldn't turn it up too loud....hehehe This is fantastic, Janet Marie! I can totally relate! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
~Turn it up Loud~....is there any other way Your inspirations are sounding wonderful tonight!! Music makes the world go round if ya ask me...love is only along for the ride...lol you captured that feeling perfectly!! Thanks me sis for this one tonight Love Ya!!! by the way I'm thinkin these two look ALOT like us what do you think? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Denise LOL... sometimes the neigbors wave and sometimes they throw things LOL thanks Butterfly ...you kill me...queen of graphics well the hair color is definatly right... I dont know about you ... but those wings gotta go ... dont feel like being good!! LOL J/K later sweet-gators me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Wings??? I was thinking boa's A Fan dance perhaps???? |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Janet~ I LOVED THIS!!! music is my passion too next to poetry. god girl we are so much alike, it's scary lol. take care! amy p.s love ya. "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful JM! I think any of us that has gotten lost in a song can relate to this. You rock on girl and keep writing fabulous poetry! *Krista Knutson* First say to yourself what you would be; and then do what you have to do. ~Epictetus~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ah I can relate to this as well Jan you see us poets see more to it than just the music, the sound etc we see the words, we listen to them closely and take note as to exactly what they are trying to say, the message that is being portrayed in the song. This was wonderful to read thanks for sharing it with us Janny Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah Janet! You've won my heart over lassie! What a beautiful tribute. Van Morrison is one of my all time favourites and "Into The Mystic" is one of my favourite songs of all time. I absolutely love that Moondance album! I just love the way you have expressed your emotions in your tribute -"I want to feel the bass surge right throught me...I want to taste the rythum..touch the sweet harmony" I played guitar in a band for several years and I understand completely....Just great mmmm so good...E. Lewis True (ethome) |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Great writing....I am a lover of music too..it sort of is like medicine for your soul...I can totally relate to this one.... Julie |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Great writing....I am a lover of music too..it sort of is like medicine for your soul...I can totally relate to this one.... Julie |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You're too cool for me girl. Of course I can't tell you whether or not I am old enough to remember Jaskon who? LOL Marina |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Totally relate to this one JM! My one big sadness in moving from the country recently was I had no neighbours for 12 years ... and boy that music played LOUD! Even had an outdoor speaker on the tree (never grew up I didn't) ... loved this Janet Marie! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is totally cool and upbeat, Janet Marie, and I like it very much! Good description of how music gets under our skin! Corinne |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Back to the Top for this one. For a cool chick on her special day!!!!!! Marina |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
"Rock and roll is our epiphany" MSP YES this is what music is about. Turn that music up I can barely hear it. My one true constant ... my quiet comfort on those long, lonely, nights, your words held my heart ... and for a while, made the world seem right. So turn on the music ... then turn it up loud so I can hear every last word, no matter how many times I've played it before, when my "brown eyed poets" sing to me ... it's still the most beautiful song I've ever heard. a wonderful poem, excellent. and Happy Birthday how does it feel to be 21? Now you drink in a bar legally. lol Have a great day. There would be some cool graphics here if I knew how to use them. lol ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh Gosh! I almost missed your birthday did I??? HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!!!!!!! Wish upon you lots and lots of smiles.... ------- Yeah, turn on the music... turn it up loud, Invite yours neighbours over, make them proud, Pump up the volume, let the maestros play their unique sounds, Let music blaze, Let it blast, if needed use surround sound.... ------------ Many regards, and have a blast!!!! Sudhir My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I'm with you Janet, way up loud!! Especially with Jackson and Van, their music is indeed poetry! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh geesh!! Janet, the ONE day I don't get online, and come find out, it's your birthday!!! Oh dear, I'm so sorry, you should have TOLD me you were getting OLDER, so that I would have known!! So.....are you......22 now? HAPPY FREAKIN' BIRTHDAY girl! hehehe I love you bunches! By the way, I'm one of those who has to have the windows down, and the music blasting while I drive! I dance while I drive, and everyone stares at me, like I'm having a seizure! ROFLMAO When a GOOD song comes on, I damn near run everyone off the road cutting in and out of traffic to the beat!! hehehehe Yeah, I know I'm a risk to everyone's health, but Hell! Someone's gotta liven this world up! Might as well be me! Love you girl! Happy 20 something! |
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DONALD Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 10 |
HEY JANET AS THE MUSIC TOUCHES YOUR SOUL AND THE LYRICS SOOTHES YOUR HEART...I KNOW THE VOLUME IS THE KEY TO YOUR FEELINGS. NICE JOB ON YOUR POEM,I CAN RELATE TO IT BECAUSE I AM FOND OF ANYTHING THAT HAS A RHYTHM AND A TUNE TO GO WITH IT. KEEP YOUR HEAD PARALLEL TO THE SKY AS YOU BROADEN YOUR HORIZON.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Janet you sure do write a loud poem...wanted to wish you a happy birthday...I love chocolate cake so I'll be over later tonight to lick the icing off the cake. Keep writing from your heart baby girl Janet. Do you remember "Here Comes the Night". James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wonderful writing and happy birthday. *L* |
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