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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-06-14 08:40 PM


" Day dream "

Sky blue
Clouds white
Laying here
Under air
Seeing smile
Laughter heard
Birds fly
Over head
Sun shines
Warm skin
Glowing cheeks
Grass soft
Under skin
Heart sings
From within
Hair Bright
Face smooth
Soft lips
Upon mine
Given yours

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Kevin
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1 posted 2000-06-14 09:53 PM


Hi whisk,
long time,

I love the style of this, it reminds me of "stage right"

To capture so much in such small fragments at such a rapid pace mimmics love in so many ways

this is great,

SpitFire
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2 posted 2000-06-15 12:26 PM


~" Day dream "~....Love how this read.  A well written poem,....that I thank you for sharing.  *Peace.
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3 posted 2000-06-15 04:50 AM


Whiskey~
I like !
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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4 posted 2000-06-15 05:36 AM


Nice day dreaming whiskey    
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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