I No Longer See The Beacon - cowritten by Lone Wolf

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Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

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State of constant confusion!

0 posted 2000-06-14 08:34 PM

I want to thank Lone Wolf for honoring me with her incredible talent once again

I No Longer See The Beacon

As I gaze into the sky tonight
I'm wondering where you are
If it would bring you home again
I'd wish on every star

My wish would be for only you
To you my heart belongs
I've always known you were the one
To help me finish life's song

Without the melody of your love
The moon no longer shines
The sky has turned to darkest black
In the end , I guess love really is blind

I no longer see the beacon
Of the lighthouse that once was us
The harbor is now barren
So, where do I turn for trust?

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-06-14 08:38 PM

Jeffrey and LoneWolf~
This is lovely ....
keep cranking 'em out.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

2 posted 2000-06-14 11:00 PM

Thanks Marge,

I think we have decided to try to write together at least once a week.

Glad you enjoyed it

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-06-14 11:40 PM

This is excellent work. . . I have to agree with Marge on this one!! I think that I could deal with one a week!!

Great poem. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

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Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-06-15 09:15 AM

Really wonderful Jeffery and Lone Wolf! I loved the imagery and sentiments in this, well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

5 posted 2000-06-15 03:57 PM

Thank you Sven and Kit

Glad you liked it!

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2000-06-15 04:02 PM

a wonderful poem, another great collaboration

Without the melody of your love
The moon no longer shines
The sky has turned to darkest black
In the end , I guess love really is blind

I no longer see the beacon
Of the lighthouse that once was us
The harbor is now barren
So, where do I turn for trust?

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Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

"Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso

"We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde

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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2000-06-16 09:17 PM

First of all, I have to thank Jeffrey for suggesting we write another one...THANK YOU!! Love to write with you, my friend and one a week sounds great to me!!

I think I like this one best.

Thank you to all who read and replied. We appreciate the support. I am happy to hear you all liked it.

LW

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

netswan
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since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

8 posted 2000-06-17 11:01 PM

Woo Woo, you go you two!

Wonderful poem -- glad you two wrote
another one!

Lovely,

~hugs from netswan

Alwye

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In the space between moments

9 posted 2000-06-18 12:37 PM

Wow you two! This is incredible...filled with such sorrow. Gorgeous work, keep it up!

*Krista Knutson*

"Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~

"We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~

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