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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Sky Man Last night you appeared in a dream A Spanish ruin of crumbling stucco, In hidden rooms behind broken shutters Waiting for time without end. Your art on display in ghostly alcoves In puzzle boxes of carved ivory On the walls, abstract murals Adorning you like jewelry. Long fingers strum old guitars With unattached hands plucking, Floating like boats without oars Down darkened eternal halls. Your hair long enough to scoop up Twirling into long shiny braids, Finally no longer imprisoned Pointing to secrets unengaged. Sad that it took death to release you, In doing so you’ve taken me too But now it’s time for you to let go And my subconscious to set you free. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
These are wonderful images, Corinne, very surreal in their presentation. I like it  |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Very visual and nice flow! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne--You have spoken such a mood with your words...sad and dark and somehow old with time...really liked it! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Corinne, Very nice. I can see the scene so well in my mind. Ah, death . . . the great equalizer. Letting go can be the hardest at times. Good writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you very much, Balladeer, Toddles, Martie and Lone Wolf! Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
First you take us on your trips, now into your dreams. All so vivid, and something a little earee too. Nice read. Parker |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Enjoy the way you let us share the feelings. Intrigue in this waking dream. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A very enjoyable read... this is brilliant poetry... regards, sudhir |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Park, Marge and Sudhir, and Marge, very perceptive on the word "waking." Corinne |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed this much...well said, wonderfully expressed, could see everything. jwesley |
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