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Whimsical Windy Wednesday |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Whimsical Windy Wednesday ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sailing across the lake feeling the sun and the breeze Watching the wind fill the sail Gliding the crest with ease You masterfully navigate the yaw as you are prone to do I feel so at ease just being here with you No sounds to surround us The silence of silence in tow Knowing if the wind stops we just may have to row We'll anchor and enjoy looking in each others eyes Waiting until the breezes billow us with their sighs We'll sit still in the water I'll read poetry to you You will sing soft ballads I will sing them too On the majestic lake cloudless sky above Hearts content in being so very much in love The wind again buffeting The sails catch a breeze Anchor up ! We sail to the shore with ease But ... Oh, this day will float in my memory Until the breezes blow you gently back to me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"The silence of silence in tow"... Now THAT's sailing...  I love it, Marge... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ahh, Marge, what a lovely poem! Any man would be lucky to "set sails" with you!  I love the title by the way. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Thanks, lady. It was soooooo lovely and soooooo quiet ... even the breeze whispered. Melissa~ Thanks, my sailing partner is smiling at your comment. The title fit today ..... PERFECTLY. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marge, M'lady, You never cease to amaze me with your incredible talent I love this poem All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marge,...boy do you know how to tell a story. Loved this. Could see you there and it's makin' me smile  . Thank you for the truly heart sighing read. *Sigh*. *Peace. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WOW! This one set my senses to sailing if nothing else. I too liked "The silence of silence in tow"Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Such sweet longing, Marge....a beautiful image, well written as always. A joy to read indeed. *Krista Knutson* First say to yourself what you would be; and then do what you have to do. ~Epictetus~ |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Another beautiful read, Marge. So peaceful and serene. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge what a picture perfect poem A very happy peaceful thought, two loves,the sea and the wind blowing gently wondeful thoughts Marge TC~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Thank you sincerely. Glad you enjoyed. SpitFire~ Oh, life writes the stories .... I just pen them to share. Thank you. Temptress~ It was an exhilarating day. Glad you enjoyed the 'sail'. Krista~ Thank you, hon. Eloise~ Ah - that it was ... 'peaceful and serene'. Thank you. Tracie~ Thanks, sweetie. It was the 'perfect' day. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, it's been so long since I've felt that wonderful feeling ... out on the lake, breeze in my hair, wind at my back! Sigh ... thank you Marge ... you've taken me right there with such beautiful imagery! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Thank you for enjoying this so much and for letting me know. The breezes are calling your name ! All aboard, Matey ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Melissa said it all for me Marge...don't know what to add...loved it. jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ You don't visit often enough ... and here I missed your reply. So sorry, matey. Thank you, dear man. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
theres nothing better than wind in your sails and your mans hand on the tiller |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I don't have the words Marge, just a smile! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Sounds wonderful, Marge!! This beautiful poem is a grand match for such a lovely day! I can feel the breeze in my hair now.... Mmmmmmm Love ya! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Marge! I envy the way you write!! I sent this one to a friend...it's wonderful! ~Kelly Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
well the read was not what i expected from the title, but turned out to be even more so delightful....great poem |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Yep ! Wonderful on both counts. Thank you. EagleOne~ I like your smile ! Lil' Lizzie~ Always pleased when I read your replies. Katherine~ Thank you !!!! KellSue~ What a wonderful compliment. Hope your friend enjoyed it also. Corazon~ Little delights are sometimes better than great expectations, huh ? Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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