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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I write this poem alone and naked, proud and humble, pained and peaceful. I write this poem to you full of songs without music, words without voice, love without consummation. I write this poem to you eyes closed and seeing, face uplifted and blind, sky dark and roofed out. I write this poem to you with tears at the corners of books never written, candles never melted, flames never struck. I write this poem to you with my love. copyright 2000 Mike Chmielecki |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--I am very touched by this poem...It is simple yet says so much...wonderfully done! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mike, The fruitaged of your spirit shines in this one, so very much enjoyed, wonderful work here. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
words of a priest here...laugh if you like, I can't hear you...this is open heart poetry...and you have moved me, once again. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Martie, Thank you for your kind reply. I wrote this after realizing I'm in pain, but also at peace about it. Interesting feeling.  Cerenity, Thanks. I've done spiritual poems before -- in fact, I think a lot of my stuff has spiritual themes in it, just really, really buried. This time I wanted it at the surface. serenity, I'm not laughing. I was touched, too (by your reply). Mike |
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