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Richard McDonald
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 29
Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-23 10:01 PM


Free at last for I have found,
A Place where all my joys abound,
A place which lets me be myself,
A place for me and no one else,

A times I feel when I'm alone,
The world is me, This place my home,
To run, To jump, To feel this free
But, alas, not all can be.

For soon from this dream I shall awake,
This dream my life, I cannot make,
To let the love replace the hate,
A dream it is a dream not fate.

But friends will help me see this through,
To me my friends will help me prove,
That all is good, my future free,
To make it all that I want it to be.

So where from here, which direction go,
Which path will let my spirit grow,
To that which my God wants it to be,
To that, my dreams, my friends can see.

© Copyright 2000 Richard McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-07-23 11:18 PM


Welcome to Passions, Richard! I like your poem! Replacing hate with love is an admirable goal and only God can help us to do that!

Denise

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