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Summer Senryu (thanks to Janet Marie!)
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Summer Senryu (thanks to Janet Marie!) |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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my first attempt, please be gentle! < !signature-->soft sunlight cool gentle breezes waves crashing ~*~ shell seeking foreign treasure trove ocean gifts ~*~ barefoot days with sand tickled toes feather clouds ~*~ gulls overhead they scream and soar on thermal lofts ~*~ autumn soon cherish sunfilled days while they last ~*~ "Our life, exempt from public haunt, finds tongues in trees, books in the running brooks, sermons in stones, and good in everything." --William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 07-23-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Yes...You have captured this beautifully...be gentle? no need...lovely X angel...no more need be said... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
love to read you write so lovely I'm impressed  Rex |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
X, these were wonderfull. I just got back from the ocean, and your making me miss it already. Somehow the third one, makes me picture you walking in the sand, though I have no pics, maybe I need some....  Parker |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
why thanks all! you make me want to try more senryus!  and Parker....uhm who d'ya think that is standing with the horse? Uhh nope not my brother.....tis me! silly! ;Þ~* ~H |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, I was hoping for some pics of your riding the horse, or walking on the beach, or ..... whatever you can come up with. Your brother looks kind of sweet, if thats him.. Parker |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beautiful is the first word that came to mind when reading this...and I say well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
XAngel~ Summer filled pages Memories last forever Better than photos Sand between your toes Castles wash away with waves Prints left in the sand Seagulls overhead Flock on wings spread in glide Calling card on head Parker rushes in Shares umbrella with brother You ride off on horse Polaroid the days Of summers sweet in album Autumn comes too soon *Your Senryu's were perfectly lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
omg Marge I am gonna die...the thought of Parker and my brother snuggling under an umbrella about made me lose it! good'un girlie I like yer lil poetry happenin there too! ~H |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WOW! You do senryu's, too??? I didn't even know you were ambidextruous!!!! These are great |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
tisk tisk Marge, I may have to bite you for that one. lol X Angel please get that thought out of your mind, id be riding off with you. Parker |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
uhm Parker? one teensy problem....my horse is 22, cranky, and doesn't ride double.... >;oÞ~* ~Heather PS 'Deer...yeah I been ambidextrous for years now ya nut! *whap* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well I'd like to thank you for thanking me then these are GREAT!!!!! no need to ask for mercy LOL im so glad you were inspired by mine to try these...as it was for the same reason I wanted to...I read one of Michael G's and enjoyed it so much I wanted to learn. that is the gift of here, we all inspire and teach each other new things... Nan will be so proud  enjoyed a day of summer senyru fun. thanks angel-girl jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yep - Proud, I am... She's ambi-senryuous.... and I DO have pics.... |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Oh yeah! These are good, and are they not fun! Loved them........... |
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