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| Open Poetry #8 |
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Zion Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 33Melbourne Australia |
I walk long the path of life Often stumble and fall to my knees I see so much but so little can I touch I cry out I shout I scream in anger Do I delight in the pain? I have felt the flames of hell They licked at my heels Where can I run? Where do I hide? I feel the wind from the wings of angels I watch as their tears flow The sorrow and tears fall like rain They flood the gutters they ease the pain I look into the clear waters My ears hear the songs that erupt From the swirl the busting bubbles All around me as the world unfolds I see the love and I see the mistrust I see the joy the sweet childs trust I hear the laughter see cheeky grins My eyes blink away the dust that feeling of mistrust My screams of anger and shouts of pain They too fall and gather in the dust I walk tall I run I reach out to touch the sun To grab at the stars and gaze at the moon My friends my family I can see Will they come with me? As to the future I rush |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Zion.... This is very powerful writing, and it's done beautifully! It has a message that manifests itself in the last line, "...as to the future I rush..." Excellent work here, and would also like to welcome you to Passions!! A great bunch of folks here, so enjoy!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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Ardonida Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 76 |
Zion... These are such truly spoken wise words, only one who has live will understand, and those who have not will learn... A. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Zion, welcome to the forum! hope to hear more from you. Kathleen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Zion Welcome to passions  This was so touching, so beautiful...I to am looking forward to reading more from you Bye Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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