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Ardonida
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since 2000-05-18
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0 posted 2000-07-22 07:36 PM


When you look upon him, you do not see his face.
He stands alone, yet takes up no particular place.
He walks with a stride, he runs like a river flow,
He talks gently but can throw an impressive blow.
He never push to get ahead, yet he's always in the lead,
Never mind that he is in front, he will stop if you're in need.
He does not laugh, he does not cry,
He does however answer when you ask "why".
He has a partner, not one, but a few,
He knows us all... you... you... and you.
Who is this man? A super hero of note?
No my freind, let me introduce, and this you can quote,
His name is Mr Reality, "He says pleased to meet you",
Is it your pleasure too??
A.  )

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-07-22 07:53 PM


Sometimes it's not our pleasure too.
Very truthful common sense words here written in a great poetic style...gets the point across.
That Mr Reality shows up all the time just like you describe him.
I enjoyed reading very much.

Ardonida
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 76

2 posted 2000-07-22 08:02 PM


thank you...again ethome!! yeah, reality bites, but then, if you are famale, it kinda makes it easier to cope describing reality as a him...lol, tall dark and handsome...
A.

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