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Yoko , Oh No Wind Blow (Or , I Can't Hear The Forest For The Breeze )
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Yoko , Oh No Wind Blow (Or , I Can't Hear The Forest For The Breeze ) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
The might of trees by slight degrees is swayed The subtleties of wind on leaves displayed Would were mine finesse of line and word A forest fine of oak and pine be heard Majestic growth from which to quoth one seed T'would nourish both till flourished , done with need But my efforts of influence are as thus As zephyrs of insouciance upon dust [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 06-14-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow really cool lil poem with the flowing of my babys runny nose and i died at the title o course! |
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Justin Conceivable Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 16 |
ohhhh I liked this! Great title! Awesome poem! Kudos Doc! ~JC |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Came in to find a laugh and am sitting instead in awe [know how that feels?] Good job, doc! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Wayout, Coming from you , being compared to a baby's runny nose is truly high praise indeed .Many thanks. JC, Hey ol' buddy , didn't know if they'd let me in here or not , so I guess if I write somethin' not too bad , they may let me stay awhile Sunshine, Well you surely brightened my day , I've been getting rained on for weeks seems like . Glad you liked . Doc |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yeah, my efforts of influence are about the same. Good poem, point well taken. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well, this blew me away! This is fantastic, Doc!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DrMoose~ Such talent ! I LOVE it ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
d. and Marge , So glad you enjoyed .Looks like the canvas of Open Eight has lots of room for my doodles.Hopefully I'll find time for more R&R's Doc |
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