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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-07-22 12:54 PM


The Beginning

Will I know you on the other side?
Will I see a face from which to hide?
Will there be any hint of our past love?
Will we still fit, like hand to glove?

You will know me when you're there.
Look in my eyes, your reflection is there.
Our love will be the common ground
I'll hold your hand, still spellbound.


But after all this time, will you love me still?
Ah my love, indeed it is my will.
Even though are paths are crossed?
Your love is all I've ever sought.

Will I know you on the other side?
Do beggars wish so they could ride…
Will you know me as I know you?
Look in my heart, my words are true.

And when we are again but one
we will walk into light's sun…
and be there in all His glory
leaving behind the rest of the story…


©Karilea Rilling Jungel
22 July 2000



Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-07-22 01:04 PM


The beauty of this is stunning to say the least.  You have made me happy to be able to read one such as this on this quiet Saturday.

ethome
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2 posted 2000-07-22 01:07 PM


You will know him on the other side because you love him so much now. Love is love and it will be remembered between the heart and the mind. Even those who have separated travel back through the good times and the memories of the things that attracted them to each other. Excellent poem deeply spiritual in many ways.......Take care.......ethome....
Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-07-22 01:14 PM


Mark, your comments are sweet and I will hold them dear...thank you..

Ethome...I would guess this is yet another travel on one of those planes that calls to me...thank you for your comments, and for reading...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Bill Charles
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4 posted 2000-07-22 01:20 PM


Sunshine,
A lucky guy is what I can say. A lot of closeness was felt when I read this poem that you wrote.

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5 posted 2000-07-22 01:31 PM


Karilea~
I think you know the answer to this one -

Of course .....  
Beautiful touching of a caring spirit, my dear.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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