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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-07-22 01:19 AM


We are the forest..
Saturday, 22-Jul-2000 01:04:01
s
o
m
etimes days disappear
and when your not looking

routine steals your everywhere

f
a
ilure for the masses..its common,its coming

n
e
ver simple..never ordinary..this is me..at my best

w
i
l
l..not hate..and will not worry..feel so quiet,and totally at rest

b
u
ild on a moment to escape the hurry

a
n
d..as long as you let the demons play
we're gonna be just fine..perfect and ok

w
e can hang and hurt . above them
from the highest tree
the worlds a cannibal
j
u
s
t..cant let them realize

w
e can see them as they truly are..wishing to reach and molest every one of our stars..

i
f we can fool ourselves we can believe..we are the forest and they are the trees..and the emotions that do flow

f
rom the eyes and from the soul..is just less than planned(out of control)

a
n
d i just thought in/a/determined/demented/way
you might help
m
e find myself today.. in an everyday empty
or an everyday way


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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-07-22 01:37 AM


s
o
m
etimes days disappear
and when your not looking
routine steals your everywhere
=========================
n
e
ver simple..never ordinary..this is me..at my best

w
i
l
l..not hate..and will not worry..feel so quiet,and totally at rest
==========================
a
n
d..as long as you let the demons play
we're gonna be just fine..perfect and ok
==========================
w
e can see them as they truly are..wishing to reach and molest every one of our stars..

i
f we can fool ourselves we can believe..we are the forest and they are the trees..and the emotions that do flow

f
rom the eyes and from the soul..is just less than planned(out of control)

a
n
d i just thought in/a/determined/demented/way
you might help
m
e find myself today.. in an everyday empty
or an everyday way
=======================
jac...this is so cool...
you have some really cool,
well written, thought out lines here
very deep poem...
with the rhyme and cadence
it read like a song
excellent work my friend..
Im pleased to see a post from ya...
its been a while
take care
jm



There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

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