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Trace of Lace
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Trace of Lace |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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This--- this is my piece of you. I wrap in silk and tie with lace. Protect you, deep, under my quilt, in chest of cedar blessed by grace, as memories stream down my face, amid my posies, pressed. Should I grow old, I hope to wander up these attic stairs to linger-- every fold of satin thought, every crease, a smile to finger... trace of lace, mystery's face, memories now, my posies gold... and in that moment, ever young, once again, your hand, I'll hold. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ I really really like this!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Beautifully written great poem serenity Rich |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This--- this is my piece of you. I wrap in silk and tie with lace. Protect you, deep, under my quilt, in chest of cedar blessed by grace, as memories stream down my face, amid my posies, pressed ============== every fold of satin thought, every crease, a smile to finger... trace of lace, mystery's face, memories now, my posies gold... and in that moment, ever young, once again, your hand, I'll hold. ================= this is simply perfect me twin... so very fragile and graceful you need to wrap that muse of yours in lace *kiss kiss* me ps we dont get older... we are like fine wine.. we just get better and more expensive with age lol |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
SEA---I thank you so much kindly. Rich--there are no words, I'm with you in spirit. Janet-me grinnin' twin--somebody better hit the lottery soon...bwahaha... love ya all muchly. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I love the visions of dusty lace this brought to mind never say never |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Don't expect much from me tonight -- I's braindead. But let me say: Whoa, just like Keanu. Was that scary or what? Mike Loved it! Your language continues to evoke things beyond language's grasp. TOld you I'm tired. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Paula, Thank you so much for reading... And I loved the dusty lace imagery.. and Mike, me heart breaker, scare me some more, and I swear, I'll call up keifer...now...how scary IS THAT? Thank ye both, muchly. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh so sweet and tender...wonderful poem sweetie Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o sen i like backspacing love this lots |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Serenity, wow all I can is beautiful really beautiful. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Serenity this is very well done, there's certainly a "Trace Of Lace," all the way through. Excellent! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
tracy, brian and ethome, thank you for your kindness...Hugs to you... and walt...why do you not have a homepage? grinning over here m'friend... Thanks so much... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Know when I say "I wish I wrote it" that I like it very much indeed... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
SUPERB......simply SUPERB. Nuff said??? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, SweetSerenity~ I see you're tripping through the memories again .... thanks for inviting me to share the lace. 'Should I grow old, I hope to wander up these attic stairs to linger--' Beautiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sunshine...oooh...I thank you for the yummy compliment! Mark...no, no, never enuff...tell me more! Please feed the poets...lol, thank you... Marge, I was hoping you would read this one...after I posted it, I thought, gee, I hope mom likes this one...(I've been working on the bad attitude...wink!) thanks. Now that you have read and I have thanked you properly, I'll let it rest now...lol |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This beautiful work...you are a master at weaving the lace~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
like a gentle memory. . . just wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Should I grow old, I hope to wander up these attic stairs to linger-- every fold of satin thought great pace here serenity ... loved this piece ... |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
every crease of this poem, i could feel the attic's throne, it's hands holding, all that crept to its hieghts for rest. and i especially love the title, Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
these are thoughts to cherish to be sure well written as always serenity |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i can feel every crease tucked in the hands of the attic's throne, i especially loved your title. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sen, I hold your hand even now. That's what friends are for, eh? Your pen keeps sharpening m'lady, with every piece you put it to! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
butterflies---you are a master of "feelgood" I thank you kindly, lady... Sven----------you are too Sveet!!! MA Miller-----as always, I salute you back... thank you so much for reading. redheart------WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN? lol...oH...AND thankyoukindly.. BIG GRIN.... Rex Allen-----my buddy...I love ya much... Christopher---I can almost feel it....no, I do, I feel it...almost sweet, but I didn't type that...grin was gonna let it rest but had to thank you all...so...THANK YOU... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just came by to feed the poet(S) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Serenity, Beautiful poetry from a wonderful poet, so much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
There's not much I can add to the other comments. I really like this one too! Sing while you may |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Loved this . . . those memories are so precious. The lace imagery is beautiful. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
WOW!!!!! I could've sworn I was up in an old attic with a dear old friend. Beautiful piece of art you have here. |
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