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Naked Heart
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Naked Heart |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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I never thought I'd see you.. I didn't need the pain.. This bouncing back and forth is simply DRIVING ME INSANE! I never really had you.. Our love was incomplete.. It's like a fire burning bright.. but burning without heat.... ---------------------------------------------------- I tried so to forget you.. Not answering your calls.. I built a mighty fortress and was safe within it's walls.. But then you worked your magic.. My walls just shrank from view.. Now here I stand, With naked heart, In love, In front of you.... ---------------------------------------------------- You know that you can have me.. All it took was just a look.. I'll gladly give you what you want.. I'm just an open book.. You look at me and smile that way.. My feet won't let me run away.. My naked heart is glad that you came back to me.. To stay.............. ~~~Never say Never!~~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, Galloping horses couldn't stop this one from touching me. How passionate and sensuous you write. Whoa Sunny, I loved this one!!! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Give me that allure that attracts someone so strongly; and i promise I will try to love again.. Very nice Sunny1 |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill..... Once again, I thank you....... I love it when I can touch someone with words.... Jamie.... You already have it...it's there from your heart in everything you write.... Thank you for reading!! ~~~Never say Never!~~~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
lovely poem you've written Sunny I could read ones like this all day lucky fellow too  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautifully penned. An attraction like that would be worth exposing my heart for. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well done Sunny beautiful piece of poetryTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Very well writen Sunny, it did touch my heart..... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
To Rex, Mark, Tracie, and Michael....... I just want to say thank you for reading this piece and I'm so glad you enjoyed it..... ~~~Never say Never!~~~ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Loved it, Sunny1...felt like humming a tune with it ~~softly Maureen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Maureen..... Thank you for reading! I'm so glad you enjoyed this.... Love received is equal to love given! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Is my Sunny1 having fun yet? Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sunshine...Yes....this is one place where you can let loose and be yourself and ..... Yep!! I'm having a ball!!!!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just had to bring this back, it is so perfectly expressive of my feelings. Another gem. Catalinamoon |
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